Tuesday, October 28, 2008

blog free write #3

Blog Free Write #3

Be sure to check spelling and punctuation. Remember to start a new paragraph with each new idea. Write at least 300 words. You may want to use a word document and then copy the writing into your blog. I will show you how to do this if you need help!

Due Monday November 3rd by 8am.Choose one of the following prompts:

1. Write a narrative starting with the words "It was a dark and stormy night...."

2. Explain in detail your favorite Halloween or trick or treating experience. Explain who you went with, your costume, and any other details that made it your favorite/best halloween.


My favorite trick-or treating experience was today. I went with Emma Hunt, Emma Bixel, and Alese Haviland. My costume is a dead prom queen, Emma Hunt was a fairy, Emma Bixel was a half devil half angel, of as I like to call it,"a dangel", and Alese was a fairy also. What made this night my favorite of all my other trick-or-treating experiences is that we we had a really great time together. We started trick-or-treating at the end of our street then work our way up the street. ST some houses they gave us a ton of candy! Even a few houses gave us those big one dollar chocolate bars. We were walking around in our shoes for about an hour and a half, except Emma Bixel! She decided that she wanted to walk around in her bare feet all night because all she brought was her high heels. I offered her if she wanted to wear me flats for a while because i knew that if I was walking in my bare feet all night, my feet would really hurt. Emma refused to take my shoes. I warned her that she would she stub her toes, she didn't listen and ended up stubbing her toes five times by trick-or-treating was over. As we were trick-or-treating, we saw Lexi Holland and her family trick-or-treating on our street. This year we didn't as much candy as normal. Probably because of the big Perry football playoff game. There were almost fifteen houses on our street that weren't even home. I thought that there would be less people at the Perry game and more passing out candy. After we were done trick-or-treating, Emma Bixel, Alese and I all slept over Emma hunts house. Our feet were so sore, even of those that had shoes on! We ate some pizza when we got to Emmas' house and then stayed up late and ate almost have of our trick-or-treating candy. Yes, we were very hyper. We all made up a cheerleading dance to "my hips don't lie remix." We haven't finished it yet though. We watch the movie "The Day After Tomorrow, " it was a really good movie. We didn't get to bed until about one thirty in the morning. Everyone got up around seven thirty or eight o'clock. We had pancakes for breakfast, except Emma Bixel, she had cold pizza from last night. After breakfast we went on her back porhc and practiced the dance some more and added a few more moves to it. Then it was about ten o'clock and I had to get packed up and go home because my mom was gone and my little sister was home all alone and she's ten. So then Emma, Emma and Alese walked me home. I had a great time trick-or-treating and over Emma Hunts' house. This had been my best trick-or-treating experience so far!!

2 comments:

Amy said...

Sounds like you had fun Lin-Lin!!! My halloween was kinda borin! I didn't feel too good so I stayed home until about like 7:15. by the time I got to Dugan's farms, it was almost 7:30 and had like NO time to go trick or treating. atleast you and lesie and emma and emma had fun!!!!!!!

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Slawinski2008 said...

Lindsey- +9 Make sure you separate ideas into paragraphs!